Constructive criticism needed for game title
#1
Tell me what you think of the title name and the design.
(title and game not relation to the chick flick movie Twilight)

[Image: twilightendhlntcopy.png]
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#2
Nice but i took me a while to figure out what it said but it looks really nice .
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#3
If you're going for a horror theme, then I think the font could work. However, as noted above, I think the emboss effect is making the text a little hard to see. You might want to tone that down. :P
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#4
I can read it just fine and I woke up like 20 seconds ago and everything is blurry as hell because I'm still half-asleep.
It looks alright for a logo, but as part of an actual title screen it might be too small.
Not much to say about the actual name itself, since we don't know anything about the game.
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#5
Emboss effect? I haven't used any embossing, I just changed inner/out glow effects. :P
I'm drawing the battler, I might post it here for constructive criticism as well, I'm planing to do all that before I post up my project
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#6
It is very hard to read, also the fading effects are a bit too much.
maybe you would like to select a fun color scheme as well.
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#7
I'm going for the black and white effect, not rainbow, and I actually made copy of the text layer two times and use Gaussian blur effect, I'm going to reduce the number of layers then.
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#8
why not request a logo?
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#9
Why should I? o_o?
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#10
I would recommend making the text contrast more with the background. I think that if you made the text darker it would be easier to read. Right now, it's hard to make out what it says because it blends in too much, imo.
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