Magitek's Art dump

[computerwizoo7]

ur last picture is a good start, drawing starts from a shape so if u got the shape right then you can always add detail later.
still the lines are very bad so ur gonna have to do it over, pay close attention to edges.
example:the hair around his neck, hair overlap each other and should have varying width and length of strands of hair.
also pay close attention to perspective, ur drawing in 3d(its actually 2d but the shade resembles 3d)

so a person's face should not look flat but with dimensions, to cut it short.

good luck