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I want to get a good idea on what c&c you can give me on what I've done here.


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Bamboozled again. I thought I was going to see sprites and all I see is demon portrait.
It pretty much is a sprite lol. Just thought it would be more appealing with a background.

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Sorry for the confusion.
It might be an artist's rendition of a sprite, but I really doubt you have such a large character bumbling across the map like a Mutant Enemy Credit
It's a battle sprite, and it's supposed to be that big. Does anyone have any critique to make it look better?
it looks pretty good :) the front arm looks like it's curved and the fist looks wrong. The only other thing I'd point out is that the cape doesn't fall naturally unless it's supposed to be moving in the wind or something? Good job on the shading :) Oh, and does the cape only connect on one side? if not you should see a little of the other side i think
the cape is pretty much blowing in the wind. And the hand has to go lol. I'll prob animate it sometime tomorrow. But it is indeed one of our larger battler sprites.

Got a little help and here is the progress

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I did a real quick sprite of Joanna from perfect Dark thought I would show it off a bit.

[Image: Jonedark_zps21d59a29.png]

As well as an animation of a character I am helping out for a project.

[Image: cloak-2_zps799a30fc.gif]
I think you should straighten out the golden cuffs of the demon; I don't know any character with lower arms that curvy.
And the right arm is so curvy, it looks like his fist is hugging his upper arm basically.
My suggestion is to straighten the right arm so that the fist is kinda in the middle of his 6/8-pack muscle. And the left arm should be straighter.
I have an update of that but I do indeed see what you mean thanks. I have ton of edits that I would like to show just not sure if that would be anything to post on this forum.
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