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On Mixcraft's site: "Add unlimited VSTi™ instruments"
The instruments and effects I showed you ARE compatible with Mixcraft.

here's my intro:

Watch out of clashing notes (0:22 for example). Try separating those strings a bit (make the high ones higher, simply take them up an octave). The last part of the song doesn't match the beginning part, there's no continuity. Maybe you need to keep the strings going and slow the bass down (the sudden change in speed is jarring).

The first part is definitely a step forward in the sense that you've got two different things happening at once that compliment each other.

it was suppose to be a drop, like how sephiroth's one-winged angel theme starts with violins then hits to metal guitar.

also it's kinda like this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5bRPL2Hg2I

Ok, but let's look at that a bit.
It keeps some things from the beginning even after it changes, for example:
Same drum beat (one hit per beat) so the rhythm isn't changed
Same instruments re-appear, more are simply added, not -replacing- old ones.
Plus they have the benefit of mixing it all to match sonically.

Continuity. :)

hmm what if i kept the heavenly string(the first instrument heard) running throughout?

the guitar is basacillay the same notes but faster.

Maybe. It doesn't have to be exactly the same, just have something to link them.