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RE: Ace' Art and Feedback Thread - cosmickitty - 04-20-2012
I like the detail and his scars in the sketch. His torso is a little long though. Don't know if you want it or not, but here's a really quick redline of where his torso should hit.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v200/buckeyestar05/g7cbpw7q.png
Also, I'd either make the dragon thing attached to his leg like armor or make it smaller so he could walk.... but thats just personal preference. One more tiny thing, the shreds on his pants are moving like they're being blown in the wind but his hair and the chains don't have that same motion, it would be nifty if they all look windblown.
RE: Ace' Art and Feedback Thread - Ace - 04-20-2012
Thanks for your feedback! I wanted the torso to be that long, I think it's inspired by One Piece but I like that (also One Piece has longer torsos than me :D). But thanks for pointing it out :-) I do not really draw realistic but maybe I should try it :D
You're right about the wind thingie, I realized it yesterday as well. I will do some changes and colorize it and post it later.