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If you like poetry.... Some of my old stuff - Yin - 03-23-2009 A Soldier’s Cry A draft is what this is? Summoning you to paradise Smoke rises from the pallid earth Showing the lucrative lives gone dry They scatter and take out a handful of life lessons To spray the slugs to the ground Needed, the encouragement to go on and come home The strength to leave a crimson field To survive other poisoned mentalities Home is where you want to be Your personal asylum Where the little lines run free Echoing you’re given Ecstatic that you’ve returned With gifts of what they’ve dreamed Without you even knowing You’re the gift it seemed A calling comes towards sanctuary Leading to heaven Leaving loves at last Lost in the wounded meadow Trapped without a cause With the terror of the thought Souls whisper to you As the instrument rattles Playing a mollifying song Depart with us Join the breathless This land doesn’t need you But we, the spirits, do See this disaster from another view Don’t participate in the laughter Leave this suicidal garden of absent hope Come where the vision of your angels are clear This is a soldier’s cry For leaving a flower with a crippled stem And leaving little golden pellets with early reality Now this vacant spot at home is taken By not another lover, but another son Unknown to the fallen Insane Cold Blooded Killer I love to see the blood spill Kill to rip out hearts Maybe from a drill Or poisonous darts I laugh at you run While I chase with a knife Oh! This seems fun I’m going to end your life Wait! Wait! Don’t go I’ve just begun Don’t worry, I’m a pro Except I don’t use guns I’m the type that loves to torture I’m not ending you quick Just sit down in this chamber The air will get thick Then you’ll start to suffocate But I’m still not done I want to see your face Maybe open the door once When you’re just about to die I’ll let you come out But no… Don’t try I’ll only fling you about You’ll wait for me to tell you to go You’ll also be mentally scarred And just before you know I’ll be waiting in a car No, no. I’m not going to do it again I’m not really that predictable I’m going to kill you instead Your death will be beautiful But remember, I don’t kill fast I’ll take off your clothes I’ll spill hot wax All over your throat I hope it doesn’t burn At least not too much I want you to learn That I’m not to be touched Now, don’t we all know That I lost my sanity A long time ago If not, it’s a tragedy Now you have to suffer the pain First I’ll chop off your legs Don’t die! Don’t die yet! Am I getting to your brain? Don’t worry, I won’t chop off your head Can you feel it? Can you feel my rage? My book! I have to move it Don’t want any blood on that page Ooh! Look at all the blood Looks like a waterfall The other half of your body is going in mud Hah! Your legs are cut off, so you can’t even haul… Ass? Forget about it Next is your arms Look at your face, your crying! Where are your wits? Where’s my satchel charge? I’m going to end you with a blast Maybe a C4 will be better on your back Nah, maybe this death should last Huh? What was that? You want me to make it quick? That comment made me laugh I want you to suffer I want you to feel my anger Explosion galore! Blast off! Like a rocket Your ribs? Oh they’re torn Pulled out the sockets I don’t know how you’re still living You’re putting up a fight Stop crying, I have an idea! Come on, let’s take flight! Wear this parachute Oh , wait! You can’t I’ll wear it for you We’re jumping, don’t panic Seems you need a push I’ll give you a hand There’s the ground, don’t look Be careful how you land Ha ha ha! Your expression is priceless! Can you get up now? It seems like your lifeless Wow! The rest are .docx <_< I don't have office on this computer. Well, I guess I'll post more later.