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1: The 15 Epistles - Cjboy - 12-13-2009

1: The 15 Epistles

This world... has lived in a natural order for years... One god Almighty has served us, untill separate gods have come along... People forgot the one true god... the only power that the god had left was to give his power to the humans and send down 15 letters that had inscribed a separate destiny for the four messengers. To defeat the chaos ahead of the light.


Cast of Characters
Univus: Male
Little did he know, his true destiny to save Almighty and betray a fake religion even he worshiped.Univus was just a boy, and left to clear his family name. It was until he slayed the first fake god. People then named him the "Godkiller", but, in the end, People realize that he is the leader of the messengers and renamed "Godsaver". Univus had completed his task.

Markus: Male
Markus was a boy, who never went to church by his fathers restrictions of leaving the shop. Markus worked on his fathers creations at the blacksmith shoppe. he once made a spearhead, he almost killed Univus, but instead, he got him some food, and payed the tailor to sew up his cloths. Markus gets in too much trouble and moves away with his new friend.

Darring: Female
Darring is just an urban female outcast from the rest of the urban town, but the thief she is, knows the streets and gets the gang some food. Darring had to save the gang from "the fury". Darring realized she had to help these guys to their journy.

Sitholu: male
He couldn't speak regular English, but then a strange stone gave him the power to find summoning monsters and learned English. Sitholu was the magic man of the gang, and he knew that the gang needed magic to be able to fend of even the toughest monsters.


Screenshots
I have two for now

Thanks DerVVulf for the PM

1: The 15 Epistles - Alpha-Mad - 12-14-2009

No no no no no no no.

I know I'm no longer a moderator of this forum but I am a concerned member. You need to have more than this. A title in the post would be nice. Characters with description, screenshots, and more than just a short paragraph. I would recommend you take a look at some of the other project threads around here to get an idea how things should look.

1: The 15 Epistles - Jaberwocky - 12-14-2009

So this is what would be printed on the back of the game box, right?

1: The 15 Epistles - PK8 - 12-14-2009

I'm so close to closing this, if you don't fix it up. Right now it just looks like you thought of an idea for a project in your bedroom for about 5 minutes or so, didn't put any work into your project yet and then ran here to post it. Convince me otherwise by posting a story, your cast of characters and their backstory, screenshots and at least a features list/credits.

1: The 15 Epistles - computerwizoo7 - 12-14-2009

lol!
how many times did you say "god" in your little paragraph?
you really need to come up with a story as that isn't even a start.

You're not helping. - PK8

1: The 15 Epistles - Cjboy - 12-14-2009

Oh yea! I need snapshots! Hold up! Here:

Quote:[Image: xp1x.png]
Working cheat code system (Thanks to Tomo2000 at RMXP Unlimited)

[Image: xp2h.png]
2 things:

A: Side view battle system using Charsets (No idea who made it)
B: Custom summon animations (made with items from different games)

And characters:

Quote:Univus: Male
Little did he know, his true destiny to save Almighty and betray a fake religion even he worshiped.Univus was just a boy, and left to clear his family name. It was until he slayed the first fake god. People then named him the "Godkiller", but, in the end, People realize that he is the leader of the messengers and renamed "Godsaver". Univus had completed his task.

Markus: Male
Markus was a boy, who never went to church by his fathers restrictions of leaving the shop. Markus worked on his fathers creations at the blacksmith shoppe. he once made a spearhead, he almost killed Univus, but instead, he got him some food, and payed the tailor to sew up his cloths. Markus gets in too much trouble and moves away with his new friend.

Darring: Female
Darring is just an urban female outcast from the rest of the urban town, but the thief she is, knows the streets and gets the gang some food. Darring had to save the gang from "the fury". Darring realized she had to help these guys to their journy.

Sitholu: male
He couldn't speak regular English, but then a strange stone gave him the power to find summoning monsters and learned English. Sitholu was the magic man of the gang, and he knew that the gang needed magic to be able to fend of even the toughest monsters.

Edit: Miss anything? If so, I'll edit this post

1: The 15 Epistles - Alpha-Mad - 12-14-2009

It's getting there. You should put all this in the first post though. Again, look at some other projects in here to get an idea. I'll take a look at your characters later.

About the screenshots, I think you need to practice mapping. Here are some helpful tutorials:
http://www.rmvxp.com/thread-1156.html

It's alright if you're learning the ropes. We all start somewhere. Just make sure you learn how to follow forum rules.

@Computerwizoo7: http://www.rmvxp.com/thread-1351.html lol

1: The 15 Epistles - Cjboy - 12-15-2009

ok, just so you know, it's just an example... the better is yet to come

1: The 15 Epistles - computerwizoo7 - 12-15-2009

Maybe you could do a more detailed Bios for the characters like including:
Age
Origin/Place of Birth
Fighting Style
Personality
History
Goals
etc...

1: The 15 Epistles - Cjboy - 12-15-2009

computerwizoo7 Wrote:Maybe you could do a more detailed Bios for the characters like including:
Age
Origin/Place of Birth
Fighting Style
Personality
History
Goals
etc...

I agree, I'm adding it when I can