Glacia Complete Chapter One

[Jaberwocky]

Well, it looks interesting. I'll download it and let you know what I think since nobody else is posting o_o/

Also it gives me something to do instead of homework <.< >.>


Edit-
Well, there's a couple of run-on sentences but nothing major wrong in the way of grammar.
The world map is extremely laggy.
Lastly, all the facesets are appearing -behind- the message windows >.>