Relics of Nature's Fury
02-26-2010, 09:15 AM
This is an eyesore... Seriously.
I'm okay with your story, but what about your characters? Don't just name their classes, tell us about WHO THEY ARE as people.
The project's overall presentation could use some work, as well. You should probably organize and separate your information better so that it does not look like a wall of text.
The mapping is horrible. Some of them range from being barren, while most make use of the RTP in the most ridiculous ways I've ever seen. "Chino", with those brightly colored... steps (?) looks the worst, as it doesn't really go well with the default RTP and it simply doesn't look like a road way. Your interiors also display a real lack of realism. They are not only too big, but they actually lack rooms. You think anyone would have their bedroom, kitchen, and living room all in the same space? Make use of wall tiles and close some of them up. If you are trying to go for a peasant type of home, than you should simply make the house smaller.
Yeah, so overall work on your character descriptions and mapping.
I'm okay with your story, but what about your characters? Don't just name their classes, tell us about WHO THEY ARE as people.
The project's overall presentation could use some work, as well. You should probably organize and separate your information better so that it does not look like a wall of text.
The mapping is horrible. Some of them range from being barren, while most make use of the RTP in the most ridiculous ways I've ever seen. "Chino", with those brightly colored... steps (?) looks the worst, as it doesn't really go well with the default RTP and it simply doesn't look like a road way. Your interiors also display a real lack of realism. They are not only too big, but they actually lack rooms. You think anyone would have their bedroom, kitchen, and living room all in the same space? Make use of wall tiles and close some of them up. If you are trying to go for a peasant type of home, than you should simply make the house smaller.
Yeah, so overall work on your character descriptions and mapping.