Asylum
12-13-2011, 05:55 PM
Ooooh very interesting story. You might want to grab an editor for your writing because some of the sentence structure is hard to follow. The sprite seems to have some minour glitches (He seems to kinda of shift to the side a little too much on one frame, and theres a thickening of his outlines or something on some of the frames that make it look odd) in it but other than that it looks fine.
Hardcore gamer (which console should I play >_> ) - JRPG, Classic Platform Game, and Survival Horror Enthusiast (there was a hole here.) - Artist/Singer (German and Japanese > English crapola~ any day!) - Bounto supporter~ (nom nom nom souls) - Kagerozakun Obsessed! (I see. . .) - Not so normal girl XD (but you love me anyway)
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