01-16-2012, 02:04 PM
What has been presented so far reads, looks and sounds pro. I believe this is the first RM game to have a voice over introduction that I actually liked :D
While its stylistically awesome, the logo is somewhat hard to read, I'm not sure if I would've known it said "Fragments" if I didn't see the title in plain text first. It looks like "Ragnents". You normally don't see people write an F on top of an R, but I guess that's cool. The A has an unusual loop-de-loop in it, the connection of G to M is short so it looks like an N. Does any of this matter much? Probably not, it still looks pretty fancy, but it wouldn't hurt to clean it up a little bit.
Take care of yourselves, I'm looking forward to watching this project become something awesome :D
While its stylistically awesome, the logo is somewhat hard to read, I'm not sure if I would've known it said "Fragments" if I didn't see the title in plain text first. It looks like "Ragnents". You normally don't see people write an F on top of an R, but I guess that's cool. The A has an unusual loop-de-loop in it, the connection of G to M is short so it looks like an N. Does any of this matter much? Probably not, it still looks pretty fancy, but it wouldn't hurt to clean it up a little bit.
Take care of yourselves, I'm looking forward to watching this project become something awesome :D