02-01-2012, 03:33 AM
(02-01-2012, 01:48 AM)Yin Wrote: Critical hits are good especially the one with the red particle around the hand. The drawings can use some work in the anatomy dept. I know it's supposed to be anime looking, but those heads look like they would weigh the body down (at least on the first guy/girl). For naked bodies, there should be at least some muscle definition. I don't know if it's the style you are going for though. The middle girl looks good though. Your character set looks nice, I don't know how it works, but from first glance it looks like it's leaning to the left. Like she's got a limp or something.They arent gunna stay nakid you know >x<
Consistency is good, everything looks the same style wise/graphics wise.
Especially the girl, shes what 16? yeah not showing her nakid...lol
no those are bases- multiple costumes means Ima need the base to be Nakid so I can build different out fits on the Same drawing. then save them as copies. eventually Making them blinky animations. and portriats for other uses.
now on all the anatomy things, Id like you to be more oginized with your critique when its not just "looks good" or " I like this..." kinda stuff.
Otherwise Im left wondering Which files loook like theyre heads are too heavy? are you saying philemon and kisa have big heads? or are you saying the first two Critical portiats are too close?
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" being a punk isnt about just being a nihilistic violent antiauthority protestor, its about valuing people over some systemic machine. if the machine works for everyone then it is not authority, if it works for few, it is. the role of bigotry is then to convince you a machine that works for few works for all, while a machine that works for all is communism."
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