The Untold Story: Fighting for a New World

[TsunamiJurai]

Thank you for your feeback. Some of the stuff that you have said im trying to work on them. SO here is a few things im working on or fixed. Contains Spoilers.

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1# It now has a book background, just working on some pictures for it like in Zelda.
2# Im working on the scene with Aden and the Ring. So far he has to get the key from his sister when she is sleeping. When he puts it on he will do abit of screaming and the player get a glimpse of demon form (but it be flashed white) and pass out. I will deifiently use that idea with creepy music and maybe some fast images.
3# The boat was... at the beginning stages of game but left it out. Guess I should make him say something else.
4# I fixed the "transition" at beginning with Ellen with a black picture so it doesnt show her lol...

So the how was the part when Sopia joined and so. What about after that? Did it get more interesting?

I have not gotten that far yet.

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I was standing near ellen and aden's home for a while trying to steal the guys boat. Once I realized i could exist the city south i killed stuff for a little while then realized i could across the bridge there with my new party member. I am currently in a cave with black monsters fighting a blob that killed me. Ill go back and try to find Sopia, I don't remember an option to get her.

So far, I would say it has a good foundation. Game play is nice, story is good (has your basic rpg elements), but I will have to get farther to really give a strong this is amazing reaction with the meat and potatoes annnnnnd dessert. That moment of wow... I was not expecting that or OMG did that just happen... im waiting for it with anticipation.

Thennn. Just get through the cave (dont worry about Sopia she will come, for now its you and Valerie.) and contiune. You might get your wow.. And dont forget any skills that can be learned. So check your bag or buy some at Library if you haven't. It will ease up on fighting abit. Also there are currently 4 hidden caves with goodies. Everyone likes free stuff.