Memorie

[KDC]

Thought I'd give you a bit of progress. There are some typos and bugs... And I think I am rusty in the writing department.
Well, anyway, here's part of the beginning of the story.

Do you use the advanced message script? It looks like it.  The ?? name boxes are not necessary in some way. i think it would look better without it in the beginning. 
Your map is missing some shadow tiles to give it more depth of the room.   The door tile at the bottom of that one room, you can nearly remove it and just use the sound animation, that would look a bit better i guess.

After all it is a nice Intro :D

Yeah. It's the Universal Message System by Ccoa I've been using it since I started the project back in 2011. As for the ?? boxes, I can see your point, but when it comes to two characters talking, when the screen is black, there's usually two people talking, so the ?? boxes will be needed for that, but I think I can remove the one where the screen isn't black.

When it comes to mapping, shadow tiles are the ones I have troubles with. I'll see what I can do with that, but I can't guarantee it'll look good. Yeah. I see your point with the door at the bottom. I'll take that off, and just use the sound animation.

Also I'm glad you liked the intro. ^_^