Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~
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Some good stuff here. Always a problem in a game to get meaningful dialogue without bogging the player down with too many words. Dialogue needs to a) develop character, b) describe scene and c) move the action, while sounding realistic and not forced. Well done!
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Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-16-2021, 10:36 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Mike_Everley - 11-17-2021, 02:20 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-18-2021, 10:00 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-22-2021, 01:38 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 12-05-2021, 07:25 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-03-2022, 03:13 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-15-2022, 10:05 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-06-2022, 06:13 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-12-2022, 04:50 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-27-2022, 08:09 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 03-25-2022, 02:07 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 05-22-2022, 10:39 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 12-29-2022, 10:11 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-08-2023, 05:45 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-15-2023, 05:32 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 04-09-2023, 05:25 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 06-16-2023, 01:29 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 08-27-2023, 11:43 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-07-2024, 10:01 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-22-2024, 01:44 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-19-2024, 03:08 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-24-2024, 07:37 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 03-04-2024, 01:58 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 03-24-2024, 04:31 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 04-08-2024, 01:27 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 04-13-2024, 04:20 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 05-13-2024, 02:28 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 06-09-2024, 01:23 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 08-14-2024, 03:49 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 09-13-2024, 07:33 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 09-23-2024, 12:14 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 09-30-2024, 01:44 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 10-26-2024, 08:52 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-03-2024, 11:55 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-12-2024, 12:05 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 12-01-2024, 02:07 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 12-24-2024, 01:50 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-12-2025, 01:03 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-10-2025, 05:44 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-23-2025, 08:28 PM

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