Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~
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(11-18-2021, 10:00 PM)Mike Wrote: They always say that it is like an iceberg. The writer needs to know an extra 90 percent that is hidden beneath the 10 percent revealed in the dialogue and narrative.

Remi-chanCheers~ Yeah in the game itself there wouldn't be the actual narration, that's just for the sake of my understanding of the scene and context when it comes time to implement it.

Another little snippet~
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Fyori's perspective on the fight proceeding the events just above.

And Fyori's perspective on the events in the first post.
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These won't really have a place in the game, it's just a fun exercise to do alternate perspectives.
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Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-16-2021, 10:36 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-18-2021, 10:00 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Mike_Everley - 11-19-2021, 05:43 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-22-2021, 01:38 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 12-05-2021, 07:25 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-03-2022, 03:13 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-15-2022, 10:05 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-06-2022, 06:13 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-12-2022, 04:50 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-27-2022, 08:09 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 03-25-2022, 02:07 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 05-22-2022, 10:39 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 12-29-2022, 10:11 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-08-2023, 05:45 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-15-2023, 05:32 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 04-09-2023, 05:25 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 06-16-2023, 01:29 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 08-27-2023, 11:43 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-07-2024, 10:01 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 01-22-2024, 01:44 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-19-2024, 03:08 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 02-24-2024, 07:37 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 03-04-2024, 01:58 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 03-24-2024, 04:31 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 04-08-2024, 01:27 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 04-13-2024, 04:20 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 05-13-2024, 02:28 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 06-09-2024, 01:23 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 08-14-2024, 03:49 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 09-13-2024, 07:33 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 09-23-2024, 12:14 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 09-30-2024, 01:44 AM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 10-26-2024, 08:52 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-03-2024, 11:55 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 11-12-2024, 12:05 PM
RE: Remi-chan's Writing Snippets~ - by Remi-chan - 12-01-2024, 02:07 PM

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