12-16-2009, 04:43 AM
Hi yes, while I do appreciate your drawings, there are some issues I see. In the first one, it seems to me that some of your lighting is misplaced and is all over the place. While overall, there is one direct light source, there are these few places that seems to distort this. One example would be the left hand (our right). The right part of the hand (our right) seems to be more shaded then the area of and around the thumb. If you look at our hands, teh part aroung the thumb sticks out more. I of course, did a lightsource test as well. It was areas like these that could use some touching up. Of course, the other thing I might add is the fact the your porportions seem off, but you already knew that. :3
In the second one, I appeciate some of the sloppiness in the lineart, it adds personality. Other than that, I can find nothing majorly wrong.
(Im not a pro artist or anything, these are just opinions) o:
In the second one, I appeciate some of the sloppiness in the lineart, it adds personality. Other than that, I can find nothing majorly wrong.
(Im not a pro artist or anything, these are just opinions) o: