12-17-2009, 12:45 AM
I agree with wizoo on that part. I find it odd that you have ruffled edges after he smooth, delicate ones. Your shading could use work. You pillowshade many points of the piece. To me, I cannot really find a lightsource. Also, the angle seems to change as the piece progresses downwards. The angle of her body seems to change, and is not one single perspective. Other than that, the only other issue I have is the fact that you cut of the top of her head, which bothers me as you have the whole rest of her body. o: