12-17-2009, 02:03 AM
Are you going for a cell-shaded look, or something painted? I only ask because it seems like you're using a weird mix of the two. Possibly burn/dodge tool in Photoshop? It's really doing a disservice to your work. Your shading's actually not that bad, but the flip between the cell-shaded shadows and fuzzy white highlights is making it look like you're really struggling. You've applied the "dark" (i.e. shadows) well. Use the same method for highlights.
Good luck!
Good luck!