[Rated M] Risquemon TAKING SUBMISSIONS
12-03-2011, 10:10 PM
okay, first off, I'm not trolling, I am a very serious pokemon player and I respect a lot the process of game making, it is by no means an easy task and I do wish you the best of luck, I could colaborate a bit I guess, bupreetypink sent me a note, most of my stuff can be found over at http://kuronetsuki.deviantart.com/ and I would not mind giving feedback here and there
however, I am here to offer a bit of critic, I hope it's taken as positive as possible because I do want the project to grow
a) most of the art up above (and comments or the like) show only pokemon of older generations, that's... misleading! if you are promising the 151 pokemon, let the visuals stick there
b) this really better be something original, the concept shown is preety much moemon ( http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/H...mes#Moemon ) with fanservice, I know you just said 'just you wait' but, so far there's no indication that it will be different, are we talking about new objectives/goals? the pokemon fanbase is tired as it is of the 8gyms/evil team plot
c) is the game going to be a mass of female anthros/gijinkas? it's a type of fanservice that could grow old soon, and if so, how will the breeding mechanics work? if it's mixed gender (wich I would aprove more of) how will you deal with persons on either side whinning about nude males/females? o.o
d) aside from the obvious change in sprites, is thig same going to see some new core mechanic? copypasted attacks/items/options or...?
point of sugestion:
+ you want to make a game meant for eyecandy/fanservice/etc, why stick to the original 151? not saying it can't be done, I have seen preety lovely unusual anthros of things like magneton, electrode, blah blah blah, but again, why?
why not make a list of 151 of the most loved pokemon by the fandom? custom make a pokedex with the 'all stars' every pokeperv loves like pikachu/raichu, espeon/umbreon, absol/gardevoir, floatzel/lopunny, audino/minccino
in short, full focus on the visual aspect to prevent awkwardness
however, I am here to offer a bit of critic, I hope it's taken as positive as possible because I do want the project to grow
a) most of the art up above (and comments or the like) show only pokemon of older generations, that's... misleading! if you are promising the 151 pokemon, let the visuals stick there
b) this really better be something original, the concept shown is preety much moemon ( http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/H...mes#Moemon ) with fanservice, I know you just said 'just you wait' but, so far there's no indication that it will be different, are we talking about new objectives/goals? the pokemon fanbase is tired as it is of the 8gyms/evil team plot
c) is the game going to be a mass of female anthros/gijinkas? it's a type of fanservice that could grow old soon, and if so, how will the breeding mechanics work? if it's mixed gender (wich I would aprove more of) how will you deal with persons on either side whinning about nude males/females? o.o
d) aside from the obvious change in sprites, is thig same going to see some new core mechanic? copypasted attacks/items/options or...?
point of sugestion:
+ you want to make a game meant for eyecandy/fanservice/etc, why stick to the original 151? not saying it can't be done, I have seen preety lovely unusual anthros of things like magneton, electrode, blah blah blah, but again, why?
why not make a list of 151 of the most loved pokemon by the fandom? custom make a pokedex with the 'all stars' every pokeperv loves like pikachu/raichu, espeon/umbreon, absol/gardevoir, floatzel/lopunny, audino/minccino
in short, full focus on the visual aspect to prevent awkwardness
