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 BlueSkies (COMPLETE)
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The way your history/universe section is written says a lot about your story telling - your choice of words is very interesting and I think you've used a thesaurus or re-written it a few times. I wonder how much work you put into HOW you tell the story, not just the ideas for the story themselves. From this, I would say you've worked hard...
However, on the opposing end of the spectrum, I find your occasional grammatical errors and spelling mistakes troubling as these two aspects of your writing give me completely opposite opinions of your ability.

So which is it? :P
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BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 04-04-2016, 06:06 PM
RE: BlueSkies (Short demo available) RM2k3 - by MetalRenard - 04-04-2016, 07:47 PM
RE: BlueSkies (3 hours long demo) - by Starmage - 04-22-2016, 05:04 PM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 04-25-2016, 07:46 AM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by thephantom - 04-25-2016, 08:45 PM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by MetalRenard - 04-25-2016, 10:47 PM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 04-26-2016, 03:42 AM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 05-03-2016, 07:07 PM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 02-09-2018, 11:09 AM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 03-06-2023, 08:50 AM

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