Permafrost

[Mercenary]

Being redone.

[MetalRenard]

Just to make you aware, as I did on the thread on rpgmakers.net:

Posting your writing on a forum is exactly the same as publishing it for free. If you have considered publishing in a book/magazine etc later on, then don't post it here as publishers will not pay for something people have access to for free.
How do I know this?
I've spent time on other forums that deal with creative writing and that is the very first thing they make sure you know about.

Nooow, for the work, the name is better than "The Monster", good idea there, and as always, your writing shows maturity and is well structured.
Good job.

[Mercenary]

Thank you.

And I personally don't consider myself nearly skilled enough to get published. This is just something I wrote on the side, I wouldn't post anything I've worked really hard on that I wanted to be published here, unless it was copyrighted. :d

[MetalRenard]

To the modern day internet troll, copyright means nothing.

[Mercenary]

True, but you get the point, I'm sure.

[Mercenary]

Maybe I'll make a continuation of this, instead of it ending off that way. Hrm.

[MetalRenard]

Do whatever your heart tells you to do.

[Mercenary]

It tells me that I lo-

Then I shall write another piece. Maybe make it three, if I feel into it enough.