Masamune Exploration: The Spirit Ship

[skaraflame]

Welcome to the Official Masamune Exploration: Spirit Ship thread.
This is an RP title I've been working on for quite some time now, and It's nearly finished, With a full release in the Summer.

Storyline

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A 17 year old boy called Masamune finds himself on a ship after a hole has been ripped in the very fabric of time.
This is no ordinary ship though.... It's a Ship driven by the mysterious Captain Lambart, who seems to know a LOT about the catastrophe....
The reason why this catastrophe (Named the 'Reality Crisis') happened was because a man, simply known as The Chancellor, wanted to be the World's greatest fighter and be the top Samurai, and so he killed the top 10 Samurai, except one. Master Osha was too powerful for The Chancellor and decided to revive all The Samurai. This included Masamune's Father. After Master Osha revived the Samurai, The Chancellor's son came from the Dark World and took the 10 Samurai's lives. All this caused The Reality Crisis and then Masamune and a girl named Teia were transported to a ship. This was no coincidence though.... this was fate....
The Masamune Trilogy continues this whole story.

Characters

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Masamune
The 17 year old hero

Teia
Masamune's friend who he travels with

Kane
A 16 year old boy who Masamune saves from a cave

Osha
The Spellcaster who's heavily involved with the storyline

Blake
Sorry, If I spoke about this Character then you'd be spoiled

Characteristics/Races

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Spellcasters: These have up to three lives, once they've died, they can either jump into their next life there and then or wait until they think the time is right

Demo

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=34ST4NZH

If there's anything else you need to know before you play it, just say so and I'll add it.

[Ace]

sorry.....
1. The demo is about 70 MB big, no big deal but:
the game is in the package again, also there are some BGMs in there in a .rar file... Just unnecessary...
2. Sorry but the battler of the main char looks really cappy :/ also his menu face
3. The game starts, no Intro, no story, just search for the map Oo
4. I go dowstairs the ship, there is a barrel with 4 Antidotes. I go upstairs, go downstairs, you gain again 4 Antidotes.
Obviously you used the Erase Event Command. If this is wanted, sorry, if not, use a self switch^^
5. Your Mapping is not really good, sry...
6. The girl, who you meet in the snowfields, does 5000-7000 DMG.... the guy just 200 Oo why???

[skaraflame]

sorry.....
1. The demo is about 70 MB big, no big deal but:
the game is in the package again, also there are some BGMs in there in a .rar file... Just unnecessary...
2. Sorry but the battler of the main char looks really cappy :/ also his menu face
3. The game starts, no Intro, no story, just search for the map Oo
4. I go dowstairs the ship, there is a barrel with 4 Antidotes. I go upstairs, go downstairs, you gain again 4 Antidotes.
Obviously you used the Erase Event Command. If this is wanted, sorry, if not, use a self switch^^
5. Your Mapping is not really good, sry...
6. The girl, who you meet in the snowfields, does 5000-7000 DMG.... the guy just 200 Oo why???

1. Sorry, I'll fix that.
2. I know, he's a prototype.
3. Planning that part.
4. Thanks for reminding me lol, forgot about that.
5. I'm still in training, and they're sort of still shells of the map, I have a while to perfect that.
6. She's lv10, you're lv1, maybe I should edit that o.O

Any more constructive criticism is much appreciated.

[Ace]

ok I see^^ good luck with your project and if you update your Demo I will try it out again.