Dragon Reign

[Rose Guardian]

Not met to be rude or trying to be but please respect my story and DO NOT judge it before you play the game. I DO NOT care if its cliché. Also I want feedback on this since it is a updated version of the demo.

-Story Prologue-

One thousand years ago in the world known as Vallan the Dragon of Darkness lived a castle called the Castle of Rubius. It was that it caused monsters to roam the world. The monsters would attack towns, villages, and cities once every month.

However there was a young prince named Clovis who vowed to venture through the Castle of Rubius and destroy the dragon once and for all. The only to kill it though was with the legendary Dragon Sword that was hidden in the Shrine of Dakota for centuries. Clovis managed to obtain it though and went to the Castle of Rubius that had twenty floors. No one ever made it to the final floor though to fight the Dragon of Darkness. However with great effort Clovis made it to the last floor and managed to slay the dragon once in for all or so everyone thought.

Afterword the Dragon Sword seemed to have lost its power, but Clovis returned it to the Shrine of Dakota regardless.

Now that it has been one thousand years the Castle of Rubius reappeared about ten years ago and the monsters came back and began to roam the world once again attacking towns, villages, and cities once a month at least. This met that the Dragon of Darkness was back. So many great warriors, and knights tried to conquer the Castle of Rubius but all failed and never made it to the final floor.

What many of them fail to realize is that they need the Dragon Sword to even put a mark on the Dragon of Darkness.

Main characters

Please note I am not good at explaining my characters, so please at least give my game a chance.




Raina
Age: 21
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Raina is a knight for King Clo in Star Morn City. She is very cheerful and caring. Raina has great skill and swordsmanship. She does all that she can to protect the kingdom and city from the monsters.



Jaclyn
Age: 27
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Jaclyn is Raina's best friend. She is a very strong and skilled warrior. They have known each other forever.






Singal
Age: 19
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Singal is King Clo's son. However he hates his father for not believing in him and telling him has no skills what so ever. He is a lot stronger than his father thinks and can wield a claymore with no problem.




Matthew
Age: 30
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Matthew is bow man for the king's forces. He is another friend of Raina. Matthew does all he can to make sure no one breaks in the castle.





Brenna
Age: 30
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Brenna is Matthew's wife. However she is very skilled at healing and supporting people. She is the nurse for the kingdom. (She is not in this demo)




King Clo
Age: Unknown
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King Clo is the King of Star Morn. However no one is allowed to see him or even has except his son and his most trusted knights. Even when he does venture outside he wears a helmet that cover his whole head and face. No one is allowed to get close enough to take it off even curious little children don't bother. For some mysterious reason he still looks young.

Screen Shots:

Screen Shots

Credits:


Credits:
Scripts:


YanPac Hud


Yanfly Message System


Yanfly Party


Yanfly Menu


Yanfly Party Sized Menu



Battle system like the Tales of series by misty_rain (http://kilisamenosekai.web.fc2.com/

If you are interested in using the battle system in your game here is a link to its demo at the author’s site:


http://kilisamenosekai.web.fc2.com/TKOOL/r.../tklrgss05.html

Music:
RPG Maker 3 for PS2
RPG Maker 1 for PS1
BGM 05 from RPG Maker DS (Not Used yet)
Paradise of Rubble from Tears of Tiara (Not used yet)
Enterbrain RTP
Graphics:
Character Sets: RPG Maker VX Ace Generator
Face Graphics: Me
Cut Scene Artwork: Me
Demo:
NOTE: I uploaded the game and audio file seperatly so it would download faster

Make sure that you download both the Audio and game file and extract the Audio file into the game folder.


Audio file:

http://www.mediafire.com/?hzhntgqpuz1wtjw


Game file:

http://www.mediafire.com/?xkci8c38idsqczd

[Rose Guardian]

Why isn't anyone replying to this or bothering to look at or download and give my game a chance? I can't give any of you any more information without spoiling anything. I saw one of you looking at it a few days ago why didn't you download and give my game a chance and leave feedback? Please don't judge this game before you try it that makes me very mad and that's not fair because I have a hard time explaining things. Don't tell me to be patiant either because then I'll never get feedback.

[millarso]

It's not that people don't want to play your game necessarily. I personally barely have time to do such things at this stage. Most people are just busy. It seems interesting, so don't get down over that.

Now some points I would like to mention (hopefully without sounding too harsh):
1. Be confident about your game. When I read the first two sentences, it made me think that you might find the story cliched yourself. If you introduce your game by defending the story, then people might just assume things about it that they wouldn't otherwise. Don't give them any reason to do that. Let them get into your game and evaluate your story/gameplay themselves.
2. If you aren't looking for any sort of story-related input, I apologize, but there are many writers on here who focus in on the story just as much if not moreso than playability, so you are bound to get comments like that. Just take it in stride.
3. This is where I hope I don't sound like a jerk because I don't know your background, but it is difficult to me personally to test a game when it is presented with spelling/grammatical errors. Again, sorry if this is harsh, but the story prologue above seems to be missing words, punctuation, etc. and this can be daunting to sticklers like me (and I know there are others like me in this regard.
If you would like to get this out to a bigger audience, then there are other gaming communes like ours that you could post this to as well. That could help you get more exposure. Just some helpful hints. Hope I haven't offended you.

[Rose Guardian]

It's okay you didn't offend me. I'm okay.

[JayRay]

Here's my critique, so far...

1. While I love that you created your own busts, I think you may need more details added to each character, to give it a bit more of a professional feel.

2. I would really like to see some custom tilesets in here.

3. No complaints about the storyline so far.

[Rose Guardian]

Thank you but unfourtunatly I do not know how to make custom tiles. My art I agree on that. My drawings have gotten better since I posted this. I just didn't update this game here because I wasn't getting any replies until know. If you want you can find the latest update of this game here:

http://www.rpgmakervxace.net/topic/9480-...d-6172013/

And also I have a youtube video here of my other current game I working on called Mystic Knights if you want to look at it:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImtSP7OZFi4

[JayRay]

would you like help making custom tiles? I'd be more than happy to lend assistance. I like what I see so far.

[Rose Guardian]

Yes, I would like help with them but I know nothing of making them is the problem. My imagination of original tiles isn't the best because I have trouble drawing backgrounds just not anime people.