Advent's Music

[LoneAdvent]

hey guys i am a long time RMVX/RMXP user and i have been using these sites for a while too get resources and what not from, i am a musician and i have a few pieces just sitting round that i thought someone out there might want.

So go have a listen and let me know what you think, any critic is welcome as I've never let anyone hear my stuff before, and i would like too know what you think.

Please enjoy and there is plenty more coming i just have too watch my internet usage lol

All my stuff can be found here.

http://www.youtube.com/user/LoneAdvent

Thanks Guys

[LoneAdvent]

New peice uploaded please have a listen :-)

[isaac]

De la mort amour -

Q1: Where's the melody?

Q2: Where's the bass?

Also it's not your fault but those midi drums sound really thin =/ This piece feels like it generally lacks direction

perhaps you could invest in some soundfonts and a decent DAW?

L'Exil

Was great until the synth kicked in. I would take the synth down like two octaves for a more ominous sound, which is what i think you were going for. I like the delay (?) effect

As a whole--decent tracks, especially for RPG Maker world, but they sound tinny. More bass is required!!

[LoneAdvent]

ok sweet this is exactly what i am after some feedback on what im doing wrong, thanks isaac i will go and revisit and try adding some bass tracks too them and yer it was a delay effect i used.

[isaac]

you've got potential, and I wish you the best of luck. Can't wait to hear what you're coming up with.

[deValdr]

nice raps

[LoneAdvent]

thanks heaps guys :-)

[deValdr]

looking forward to hearing more!