What I will have to post here as it is a general critique, is that coming up with the story as you go is rarely a good idea. You should at least have a rough plan from beginning to end of what is going to happen. I'll pm you if I think of some ideas.

You should spice your thread up a bit with some BBcode. Change the size of elements to make it more tidy.

(12-05-2010, 05:15 PM)Valdred Wrote: What I will have to post here as it is a general critique, is that coming up with the story as you go is rarely a good idea. You should at least have a rough plan from beginning to end of what is going to happen. I'll pm you if I think of some ideas.

You should spice your thread up a bit with some BBcode. Change the size of elements to make it more tidy.

Sorry I wasn't very clear. I actually drew this as a manga I made up and that was where I got writers block while I was drawing. So I just ended the demo after mission 5 like I did in my manga for the time being.

Graphics:
It's nice to see some ripped stuff instead of RTP though some of it isn't brilliantly ripped.
The title screen need to be redone :p

Story:
It's a nice idea though it seems unexploited. You could really push it a lot further (Love/hate relationships between characters, one has a personal agenda (revenge?) one can hate the military... Just ideas.) This could help with your writers block as it opens tons of possibilites.

Gameplay:
I like tactical RPGs (but I haven't played it).

All in all, if you put some real thought into this project I don't see why it can't turn out nice.
Good luck

(12-08-2010, 10:09 PM)MetalRenard Wrote: Graphics:
It's nice to see some ripped stuff instead of RTP though some of it isn't brilliantly ripped.
The title screen need to be redone :p

Story:
It's a nice idea though it seems unexploited. You could really push it a lot further (Love/hate relationships between characters, one has a personal agenda (revenge?) one can hate the military... Just ideas.) This could help with your writers block as it opens tons of possibilites.

Gameplay:
I like tactical RPGs (but I haven't played it).

All in all, if you put some real thought into this project I don't see why it can't turn out nice.
Good luck

Actually I got over my writers block and added to my manga then added to the game. I changed the robots to the ones that were used in Knight Blade. I now have missions 1 through 10 in the unreleased demo. It must likly won't be released until christmas break or after christmas depending when my friend finishes the artwork. Some of the event cut scenes will be replaced with pictures like a visual novel for an example and the character art is not final. As for the title screen Valdred made me a new that will be used in the next demo. Thank you for replying.

It's good to see you're still going strong =)
I hope you enjoy it!