The Critique & Feedback thread
11-22-2010, 05:36 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-22-2010, 05:37 PM by Kristovski.)
Valdred: I like the wallpaper, but like Yin stated, it is supposed to be capitalized if it is a title. also, I feel that the character is too dark. I suggest a light source from the bottom left to brighten it up a little bit without losing the dark feel of it.
Yin:The cactus needs to be edited where the bottom meets the top. there is a sliding spot that makes it look like two different entities on the right side. On the second character, the head needs to be more independent. The tail/leg? also needs a little more editing. The breathing looks awesome in the animation though. Kudos on that. The blue guy's right arm (left side of picture) is shorter than the right. His elbow should come out one or two more pixels. I have to also agree that the face is a little off, but I can't put my finger on what it is. Have you tried using the ginger's face as a template and sliding it on the blue guy?
Yin:The cactus needs to be edited where the bottom meets the top. there is a sliding spot that makes it look like two different entities on the right side. On the second character, the head needs to be more independent. The tail/leg? also needs a little more editing. The breathing looks awesome in the animation though. Kudos on that. The blue guy's right arm (left side of picture) is shorter than the right. His elbow should come out one or two more pixels. I have to also agree that the face is a little off, but I can't put my finger on what it is. Have you tried using the ginger's face as a template and sliding it on the blue guy?
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