That is definitively a step in the right direction. Spend a lot of time on your characters. Be not afraid of making them, shall I say excessively, unique.
I downloaded and played the demo and I must say that it looks quite good so far. Lots of room for improvement however. While the dialogue is good, there are certain ones that you should take a second look at. The mapping isn't bad, but these tutorials can help you a lot. I'll be working on that title screen ;)
EDIT: Ok, so I made a title screen. It's sort of minimalistic/simplistic, but I hope you will like it:
In case you are very fond of that Japanese text, here is another version:
However, I wouldn't suggest so. The rpg maker community is mostly English speaking. ;)
I downloaded and played the demo and I must say that it looks quite good so far. Lots of room for improvement however. While the dialogue is good, there are certain ones that you should take a second look at. The mapping isn't bad, but these tutorials can help you a lot. I'll be working on that title screen ;)
EDIT: Ok, so I made a title screen. It's sort of minimalistic/simplistic, but I hope you will like it:
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In case you are very fond of that Japanese text, here is another version:
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Valdred
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