RoboClash: Conflict {DISCLAIMER: rated Adult: Contains Nudity}
12-05-2010, 05:52 PM
(12-05-2010, 05:15 PM)Valdred Wrote: What I will have to post here as it is a general critique, is that coming up with the story as you go is rarely a good idea. You should at least have a rough plan from beginning to end of what is going to happen. I'll pm you if I think of some ideas.
You should spice your thread up a bit with some BBcode. Change the size of elements to make it more tidy.
Sorry I wasn't very clear. I actually drew this as a manga I made up and that was where I got writers block while I was drawing. So I just ended the demo after mission 5 like I did in my manga for the time being.
