12-23-2010, 09:35 PM
the story sounds good, whats the name?
btw, can i add to the story? there is a main point that the story is missing.
what makes the main characters different than normal people?
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well, C&C time @.@
btw, can i add to the story? there is a main point that the story is missing.
what makes the main characters different than normal people?
ans:
Code:
during the walk to do some damage, the chara gen party comes across a small troop of soldiers. in an attempt to get by them to their weapon storage room, they were caught by a small group of soldiers stationed there.
the now hopeless chara gen party is placed in front of a firing squad. upon chara gen 1's enemies pointing there firearms to his temple-BOOM!!!!! THE RESISTANCE ARMY!!!
The soldiers scrambled! chara gen 1 decided to use the opportunity to get out as he reliazed that he wasn't strong enough to do anything!
his comrade chara gen 2 now seems frustrated by the fact that his savior has lost faith in himself. sadly the two ran into an enemy and chara gen 1 was shot in the heart! chara gen 2 now in tears over the loss of his only hope left in the world-*sound of the air ripped apart* the soldier who killed chara gen 1 all fell to the ground with mortal wounds.
after the wind subsided, in came a beautiful lady, chara gen 2 surprised to see the sight of blood swirling through the air and a blonde as golden as the sun came down, it was like an angel of death descending upon the earth. chara gen 2 got back to reality when he noticed that his friend needed help, "Please Help Us!!" he yelled to the demonic beauty before him. luckily she decide to approach the their party, *she placed her hand on chara gen 1's body* i'm sorry but your friend is dea-"the demonic beauty screamed! followed by a shining light", after the light faded... chara gen 1 was standing!!!!!!!
chara gen 1 now seemed as if he was a totally different person, he said "I am The Divine Bow of Justice!" and raised his hands-suddenly a burst of light with winds as strong as a hurricane(lolz) came rushing out ... after only 5 minutes all the enemy soldiers fell to the ground while chara gen collapsed just seconds after in a deep sleep. I looked at his face and thought to myself, "i will follow you whether it's a road of flowers or a road lined by the blood of our enemies".
I am alive to see another day.
[your Grand adventure begins]
ps: chara gen fem 1 is alive and well so don't worry. the chara gen party will join the resistance army.
well, C&C time @.@