VN Premises

[MetalRenard]

it's your time, so I don't really care.

That's not the attitude to adopt when you're asking people:

• To read your work
  
• To leave you helpful feedback
  
• To be kind about work you're not too confident about, "I know it sucks, but I did a rush job".
  

Try and keep things a little friendlier ok? Thanks :)

As for the work, I like it, we discussed it on the IRC a bit and I know it has some unexpected turns but I won't say anything about that apart from that it's good.

Keep it up.