Another Untitled story
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I would have wished for a "18+" rating or something of similar kind, before reading.

I see quality in this and in your writing style. I also feel confused, but with a piece set up in a way like this one, that is to be expected.
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Another Untitled story - by BeJeremiah - 06-04-2015, 03:23 AM
RE: Another Untitled story - by MetalRenard - 06-04-2015, 04:11 AM
RE: Another Untitled story - by BeJeremiah - 06-04-2015, 04:19 AM
RE: Another Untitled story - by yamina-chan - 06-08-2015, 01:26 PM
RE: Another Untitled story - by BeJeremiah - 06-08-2015, 02:08 PM

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