If I wrote some poetry...
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I've enjoyed reading them all. I especially liked Silenced. The way you ended it with what you started with and I also liked your secret world. Keep up the good writing. It is true though, when you try to revise poetry it doesn't get better because you're not in the moment. It's why I don't revise any of mine either.
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If I wrote some poetry... - by Guardian - 10-03-2009, 08:59 PM
If I wrote some poetry... - by Yin - 10-03-2009, 11:37 PM
If I wrote some poetry... - by computerwizoo7 - 10-05-2009, 03:23 PM
If I wrote some poetry... - by Alpha-Mad - 10-05-2009, 06:32 PM
If I wrote some poetry... - by Guardian - 10-05-2009, 11:41 PM
If I wrote some poetry... - by Guardian - 10-29-2009, 01:52 AM
If I wrote some poetry... - by Alpha-Mad - 10-29-2009, 02:05 AM
If I wrote some poetry... - by Guardian - 10-29-2009, 03:42 AM
If I wrote some poetry... - by Jophie - 10-31-2009, 05:57 PM

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