Celestial Tear: Demon's Revenge [RELEASE]

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Thanks, this is the kind of feedback I need.

ok ok, computerwizoo7(The Great) will give you a complete makeover, yeah baby(politically wrong, so don't be insulted)!
hehehe, you're gonna have to send me all the graphics requests you got including those tilesets and character faces.

I happen to like my tilesets. The most I would need with those are probably little objects in the same style.
As for character faces, I like the way they are drawn, but the coloring could use touch ups if you are interested in doing that.

btw, it would be in your best interest to add a mouse system to it.(trust me)

I have tried this, but I'm not sure it's a good idea with the type of game this is. I will reapply it and see if it will work correctly. Once I have people test it out (hopefully people from here), they can tell me if it is worth keeping.

EDIT:
whoa whoa!

big problem!

Senasuke is a rough young woman, not really too smart, but very sarcastic. She has been through a lot during her life. As a child, for years, all she can remember was being in a chamber having needles stuck in her, striking painful sensations, and blurred visions of a woman. It finally ended one day when she woke up in a nice house at the age of 6

nobody can remember their childhood at age 3 or 4!

Yeah I can remember my earliest memory from preschool. I started at 2, but I believe the memory is at 3.

This somewhat good life went on for a long time until one day, at the age of 14, on her way to the park from school, she was kidnapped. Again, these terrible feelings, the same blurred visions.... It wasn't a nightmare. After a few days of torture, she was thrown on the side of her house where her brother found her.

ok, the police isnt looking for this girl?
she kills someone and they just give up on finding her, nor is her mother caring enough to pursue her?

Of course, they were looking for her! They just couldn't find her. If I said why, it would probably ruin the story.

anyway, overall... its a good story however rough around the edges.
i don't write these kind of game stories though, I'm only into action adventures.

Thank you for your feedback