Alright. so anybody have any ideas to add on to the storyline? I'm really liking the Nazi theme with the Anti-Hero. I was also thinking steam-punk, so people could so go C&C with the characters.
Beginning Story Ideas
Our hero, (Wiz Generator Character 1), works in a diner and watches the troops of the occupying army march through town everyday while he has story building talk with customers. After the catch up to the storyline small talk, they notice the soldiers aren't marching outside anymore and that the city seems empty of it's invaders. Next, you hear the city's sirens going off and hear artillery fire in the distance. The city begins to get marauded with shells, destroying the diner, killing most of the customers. Somebody survives, but is injured and you talk to them about staying calm and hanging in there as they die in front of you. After that you run off to find your wife and children. You make your way through the city as buildings burn and topple from artillery fire. You arrive at home, only to find that you are too late. You have a gay sentimental speech with your wife and she dies as the screen and sound fades out. Next scene is you burying your family in the charred park by your home as opening credits pan. At the end, you wander aimlessly through town, finding survivors. You find (Wiz Gen Char 2) burying their family and talk to them about getting revenge against the (Nazi Like Regime). They agree to come with you and yall start heading off to do some damage. While you're leaving the city, you come across troops sent in to finish the job and battle your way out.
the story sounds good, whats the name?
btw, can i add to the story? there is a main point that the story is missing.
what makes the main characters different than normal people?
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during the walk to do some damage, the chara gen party comes across a small troop of soldiers. in an attempt to get by them to their weapon storage room, they were caught by a small group of soldiers stationed there.
the now hopeless chara gen party is placed in front of a firing squad. upon chara gen 1's enemies pointing there firearms to his temple-BOOM!!!!! THE RESISTANCE ARMY!!!
The soldiers scrambled! chara gen 1 decided to use the opportunity to get out as he reliazed that he wasn't strong enough to do anything!
his comrade chara gen 2 now seems frustrated by the fact that his savior has lost faith in himself. sadly the two ran into an enemy and chara gen 1 was shot in the heart! chara gen 2 now in tears over the loss of his only hope left in the world-*sound of the air ripped apart* the soldier who killed chara gen 1 all fell to the ground with mortal wounds.
after the wind subsided, in came a beautiful lady, chara gen 2 surprised to see the sight of blood swirling through the air and a blonde as golden as the sun came down, it was like an angel of death descending upon the earth. chara gen 2 got back to reality when he noticed that his friend needed help, "Please Help Us!!" he yelled to the demonic beauty before him. luckily she decide to approach the their party, *she placed her hand on chara gen 1's body* i'm sorry but your friend is dea-"the demonic beauty screamed! followed by a shining light", after the light faded... chara gen 1 was standing!!!!!!!
chara gen 1 now seemed as if he was a totally different person, he said "I am The Divine Bow of Justice!" and raised his hands-suddenly a burst of light with winds as strong as a hurricane(lolz) came rushing out ... after only 5 minutes all the enemy soldiers fell to the ground while chara gen collapsed just seconds after in a deep sleep. I looked at his face and thought to myself, "i will follow you whether it's a road of flowers or a road lined by the blood of our enemies".
I am alive to see another day.
[your Grand adventure begins]
ps: chara gen fem 1 is alive and well so don't worry. the chara gen party will join the resistance army.
(12-23-2010, 06:11 PM)Yin Wrote: What tiles are needed? Is there any concept art for it? Google images that can be used as reference? A list of needed tiles would be helpful.
I was personally thinking brick buildings. Maybe even some steel and concrete. I'm seeing a world kind of based around the USA Golden Years (1940-1950ish), but a little more fantasy. So, like a building that looks like that time with steam-powered devices, instead of petroleum based.
(12-23-2010, 09:35 PM)computerwizoo7 Wrote: the story sounds good, whats the name?
btw, can i add to the story? there is a main point that the story is missing.
what makes the main characters different than normal people?
ans:
Storyline
during the walk to do some damage, the chara gen party comes across a small troop of soldiers. in an attempt to get by them to their weapon storage room, they were caught by a small group of soldiers stationed there.
the now hopeless chara gen party is placed in front of a firing squad. upon chara gen 1's enemies pointing there firearms to his temple-BOOM!!!!! THE RESISTANCE ARMY!!!
The soldiers scrambled! chara gen 1 decided to use the opportunity to get out as he reliazed that he wasn't strong enough to do anything!
his comrade chara gen 2 now seems frustrated by the fact that his savior has lost faith in himself. sadly the two ran into an enemy and chara gen 1 was shot in the heart! chara gen 2 now in tears over the loss of his only hope left in the world-*sound of the air ripped apart* the soldier who killed chara gen 1 all fell to the ground with mortal wounds.
after the wind subsided, in came a beautiful lady, chara gen 2 surprised to see the sight of blood swirling through the air and a blonde as golden as the sun came down, it was like an angel of death descending upon the earth. chara gen 2 got back to reality when he noticed that his friend needed help, "Please Help Us!!" he yelled to the demonic beauty before him. luckily she decide to approach the their party, *she placed her hand on chara gen 1's body* i'm sorry but your friend is dea-"the demonic beauty screamed! followed by a shining light", after the light faded... chara gen 1 was standing!!!!!!!
chara gen 1 now seemed as if he was a totally different person, he said "I am The Divine Bow of Justice!" and raised his hands-suddenly a burst of light with winds as strong as a hurricane(lolz) came rushing out ... after only 5 minutes all the enemy soldiers fell to the ground while chara gen collapsed just seconds after in a deep sleep. I looked at his face and thought to myself, "i will follow you whether it's a road of flowers or a road lined by the blood of our enemies".
I am alive to see another day.
[your Grand adventure begins]
ps: chara gen fem 1 is alive and well so don't worry. the chara gen party will join the resistance army.
well, C&C time @.@
I personally think that a title should come in time, unless you're playing off of something else. I really like your add-on to the story. So did the demoness give C1 powers or did he already have them? Also this would be a good way to help him start his descent into Anti-Hero. I'm thinking a little tweak to the end though
add-on to storyline
As the demoness touches Character1, all he can see is visions of hell and cities burning to the ground just like his had just done. He can see the demoness screaming in his brain as she became weaker, until everything goes black. C1 wakes up to find the demoness gone and his injuries healed. He can feel energy pulsing through his veins. He looked into the eyes of the soldiers around him could see the fear and hatred in them. C1 then took his hands and pulled the souls out of every soldier around him, as their bodies fell lifeless to the floor around him, one by one. C2 looked at C1 in awe, "I don't know if our path will be lined with blood or palm leaves, but I will follow you to the end. We can't let them destroy the rest of the country as they destroyed our home. Our loved ones are gone and they must be avenged."
(12-23-2010, 06:11 PM)Yin Wrote: What tiles are needed? Is there any concept art for it? Google images that can be used as reference? A list of needed tiles would be helpful.
I was personally thinking brick buildings. Maybe even some steel and concrete. I'm seeing a world kind of based around the USA Golden Years (1940-1950ish), but a little more fantasy. So, like a building that looks like that time with steam-powered devices, instead of petroleum based.
Houses, apartment buildings or both? Is this a slums or rich neighborhood? Destroyed or in good condition? Any vandalism?
Ok, I'll probably start on it after the holidays. Also I googled 1940s houses and couldn't find good reference. So if you have a reference I can use that would make things even better. I hope it comes out good!
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