Feedback on these bgms
#1
FL studio finally makes sense to me and I have created a few tunes today. I would like some feedback on how to improve these. If anyone wants to use them then just do it. No credit needed.

http://bb.xieke.com/files/BGM's.zip
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hNskAvsfkC4

Also, If you like what you heard and need some music, just ask me. I can make you some :D
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#2
They are good. :) My favorite is the boss battle theme. I also use FL Studio, but i've only made one theme for my game so far. Anyways, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to hearing more music from you. ^^
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#3
Thank you. :D

Here is a link to another tune I have made: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hNskAvsfkC4
It would be cool if I got some feedback on this one too.
However it's just a raw sketch.
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#4
One word, Awesome! Great song man, it got a dark feeling to it but hero also, lol i can't explain it, but good job!
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#5
Thank you :D
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#6
I jizzed some awesome sauce in my pants.
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#7
Battle 1 - It's good but it sounds like an intro to a battle theme. It needs to pickup, have a climax, drop a little, and then be prepared to loop flawlessly. Basically it's unfinished.

Battle 2 - Is not a battle theme. The tempo and melody fits more of a exploring a cave or dungeon in a 16 bit game type of theme. The flute action could be better, especially at the end.

Boss Battle - If it is made for a low bit final fantasy game then, this is great. But it's to raw and unpolished for a tradition rmxp game. But I do like it.

Royal - To short to judge. Similar to the first Battle theme really. I think its that 1980's snare drum you keep using that is making the music to retro and nostalgic. And the kick drum is to strong for a non battle theme. Listen to more of the rtp audio to learn more about song composition.

Good job and good luck.
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#8
Thank you for the feedback :)
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#9
oh, I was missing some BGM here...
Well~ I've listen to your Audio

A agree with dpoteat
But, I just wanna add some feedbacks

Battle1 and Royal it's too short. But, nice tones. In my opinion.
Battle2: in 0:13 of timeline u should give some tension rising. Such as beating drum,some improve tone and more instrumens. Cuz, It's look monotone for battle theme. But, I like it's intro :D
Boss battle: nice instrumen and composition... I hope u still improve this music

Keep developing guys :D
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#10
thank you.

New updates version. Removed bad ones, added new ones and improved the ones I liked:
http://bb.xieke.com/files/1/BGM's.zip
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