Feedback on these bgms
#7
Battle 1 - It's good but it sounds like an intro to a battle theme. It needs to pickup, have a climax, drop a little, and then be prepared to loop flawlessly. Basically it's unfinished.

Battle 2 - Is not a battle theme. The tempo and melody fits more of a exploring a cave or dungeon in a 16 bit game type of theme. The flute action could be better, especially at the end.

Boss Battle - If it is made for a low bit final fantasy game then, this is great. But it's to raw and unpolished for a tradition rmxp game. But I do like it.

Royal - To short to judge. Similar to the first Battle theme really. I think its that 1980's snare drum you keep using that is making the music to retro and nostalgic. And the kick drum is to strong for a non battle theme. Listen to more of the rtp audio to learn more about song composition.

Good job and good luck.
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Messages In This Thread
Feedback on these bgms - by deValdr - 03-20-2010, 04:20 PM
Feedback on these bgms - by Flare Knight - 03-20-2010, 04:28 PM
Feedback on these bgms - by deValdr - 03-20-2010, 04:37 PM
Feedback on these bgms - by Flare Knight - 03-20-2010, 05:16 PM
Feedback on these bgms - by deValdr - 03-20-2010, 05:17 PM
Feedback on these bgms - by fgsfds - 03-20-2010, 06:01 PM
Feedback on these bgms - by No ID - 03-21-2010, 03:56 AM
Feedback on these bgms - by deValdr - 03-21-2010, 01:27 PM
Feedback on these bgms - by Theodoric - 03-25-2010, 11:48 PM
Feedback on these bgms - by deValdr - 03-26-2010, 08:49 PM
Feedback on these bgms - by Theodoric - 03-27-2010, 11:30 AM
Feedback on these bgms - by deValdr - 03-30-2010, 08:52 PM

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