04-12-2011, 07:28 PM
I've played a bit (and died already cause there's nowhere to heal...?). The beginning "cinematic" is effective, good work. I think you need to improve the beginning though, from when the player takes control. The story seems to begin very abruptly. I'm sent to get some skulls and suddenly BOOM Someone wants to kill me. Maybe have that happen while you're hunting, or once you've caught the last one when you return to town.
Also, you need to revise your grammar as you put "Your" instead of "You're" twice (in the house when he wakes up).
Keep it up, it has potential!
Also, you need to revise your grammar as you put "Your" instead of "You're" twice (in the house when he wakes up).
Keep it up, it has potential!