BlueSkies (COMPLETE)

[Starmage]

Wow, thanks so much MetalRenard!! I really appreciate the way you had to edit through it all!! Thanks so much, this helped a lot and I learned new things in my writing! :D yes, the separate paragraphs made a lot of sense xDD

And please do not stress yourself, you do not annoy nor offend me at all, in-fact I'm really thankful for this! a help from a language teacher and lyricist such as yourself is highly appreciated! :D

If you do not mind, I will use your edit for my history/universe section! of course, I shall credit you! I will do my best to keep in mind what I have learned here :D