The Untold Story: Fighting for a New World

[TsunamiJurai]

Thank you for your feeback. Some of the stuff that you have said im trying to work on them. SO here is a few things im working on or fixed. Contains Spoilers.

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1# It now has a book background, just working on some pictures for it like in Zelda.
2# Im working on the scene with Aden and the Ring. So far he has to get the key from his sister when she is sleeping. When he puts it on he will do abit of screaming and the player get a glimpse of demon form (but it be flashed white) and pass out. I will deifiently use that idea with creepy music and maybe some fast images.
3# The boat was... at the beginning stages of game but left it out. Guess I should make him say something else.
4# I fixed the "transition" at beginning with Ellen with a black picture so it doesnt show her lol...

So the how was the part when Sopia joined and so. What about after that? Did it get more interesting?

And Metal. Its not a problem. Im working on some things to make it better.