05-21-2023, 04:06 PM
Been doing some rewriting of some scenes and have some vids to show for it.
Ruler Exposition
This scene used to be very different. I realized I hadn't done much to set up Rulers or explain Sin Power, so now I have that covered. The way this scene went before kind of doesn't work anymore.
Heartbroken Guardian Angel
Another huge rewrite to this scene, now it flows naturally and the reactions seem more in line with the characters.
Pink Menace
This scene was more or less entirely re-written as well, Fyori's point is much easier to understand now.
The High Courtesan
This scene hasn't changed at all, but i never did a recording of it. Until now~ This is one of the only times where you can meet Lilith before the end of Disk 2.
So yea~ I been pretty productive.
Ruler Exposition
This scene used to be very different. I realized I hadn't done much to set up Rulers or explain Sin Power, so now I have that covered. The way this scene went before kind of doesn't work anymore.
Heartbroken Guardian Angel
Another huge rewrite to this scene, now it flows naturally and the reactions seem more in line with the characters.
Pink Menace
This scene was more or less entirely re-written as well, Fyori's point is much easier to understand now.
The High Courtesan
This scene hasn't changed at all, but i never did a recording of it. Until now~ This is one of the only times where you can meet Lilith before the end of Disk 2.
So yea~ I been pretty productive.