10-28-2009, 03:30 PM
Is this your original work Archeia? Looking good.
Some things you need to improve imo are these-
The table legs are way too long for the size of the characters, and the angle of some of the objects are off too.
The books should look as if you see them more from the top.
Same for the Cauldron and stool, more of a circle( or a more rounded oval shape) look is needed.
Here's a quick example with your map, this is what i think you should change for the better.
The pots at the bottom right look ok, you only need a tad of an angle fix for these.
Some things you need to improve imo are these-
The table legs are way too long for the size of the characters, and the angle of some of the objects are off too.
The books should look as if you see them more from the top.
Same for the Cauldron and stool, more of a circle( or a more rounded oval shape) look is needed.
Here's a quick example with your map, this is what i think you should change for the better.
The pots at the bottom right look ok, you only need a tad of an angle fix for these.