11-05-2009, 09:33 PM
Looking back a bit...
This map looks excellent Lunarea, as usual with your work on Interim. The stone statue and pillars are particularly well done and the prayer area is well balanced. However, there are three things to do with perspective that seem slightly off to me. The first is, as Kain mentioned, the stairs. The stairs are too broad and either need to be narrower or shifted down so that the footboard lines up with the top of the first step in both cases. Next, the perspective of the large flowerpots seems skewed like we aren't looking down into them enough. Finally, the small flower pot seems flat since, with the leaf there, the top line appears to be straight. There not much to improve on; all in all, it looks great. I've alway found the soft colours you use appealing and I especially like the blue tiled floor.
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Kain, nice job so far. The front facing roof tiles seem flat though. In the RTP, they are shaded darker towards the bottom to create depth. Perhaps you could do something like that. The cave entrances look great. I notice that you have larger rocks at the base of your cliffs. Maybe you could add them as a partial tile placed at the base of the cliff as it goes up. At the moment these tilesets are a good work in progress.
Lunarea Wrote:
Church of Mais, in Freas. It's just a simple prayer area, and up the stairs are the healing chambers and the lead priest's living quarters.
Mais is the goddess of healing.
Thoughts and feedback are welcome! :)
This map looks excellent Lunarea, as usual with your work on Interim. The stone statue and pillars are particularly well done and the prayer area is well balanced. However, there are three things to do with perspective that seem slightly off to me. The first is, as Kain mentioned, the stairs. The stairs are too broad and either need to be narrower or shifted down so that the footboard lines up with the top of the first step in both cases. Next, the perspective of the large flowerpots seems skewed like we aren't looking down into them enough. Finally, the small flower pot seems flat since, with the leaf there, the top line appears to be straight. There not much to improve on; all in all, it looks great. I've alway found the soft colours you use appealing and I especially like the blue tiled floor.
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Any C&C would be appreciated, I've got alot of autotile work that I need to do for these.
Kain, nice job so far. The front facing roof tiles seem flat though. In the RTP, they are shaded darker towards the bottom to create depth. Perhaps you could do something like that. The cave entrances look great. I notice that you have larger rocks at the base of your cliffs. Maybe you could add them as a partial tile placed at the base of the cliff as it goes up. At the moment these tilesets are a good work in progress.