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 BlueSkies (COMPLETE)
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Wow, thanks so much MetalRenard!! I really appreciate the way you had to edit through it all!! Thanks so much, this helped a lot and I learned new things in my writing! :D yes, the separate paragraphs made a lot of sense xDD

And please do not stress yourself, you do not annoy nor offend me at all, in-fact I'm really thankful for this! a help from a language teacher and lyricist such as yourself is highly appreciated! :D

If you do not mind, I will use your edit for my history/universe section! of course, I shall credit you! I will do my best to keep in mind what I have learned here :D
Check out my Projects!! :)
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BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 04-04-2016, 06:06 PM
RE: BlueSkies (Short demo available) RM2k3 - by Starmage - 04-05-2016, 07:33 PM
RE: BlueSkies (3 hours long demo) - by Starmage - 04-22-2016, 05:04 PM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 04-25-2016, 07:46 AM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by thephantom - 04-25-2016, 08:45 PM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by MetalRenard - 04-25-2016, 10:47 PM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 04-26-2016, 03:42 AM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 05-03-2016, 07:07 PM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 02-09-2018, 11:09 AM
RE: BlueSkies (COMPLETE) - by Starmage - 03-06-2023, 08:50 AM

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