04-28-2016, 11:36 PM
I like the Derek Profile. The fact his mother is missing has potential. And I think something should come to pass when he sees this girl at the "Burger Barn" when he orders his 'Cluck This' 10pc Nugget pack.
Why is Derek's mother missing missing? Was she a reporter who uncovered something akin to the Panama Papers? Was she a secretary who discovered her company was a front for something shady? Or did she merely recognize someone on the street that day that she shouldn't have?
And what of the girl he likes? Is she someone he knew from high school, or is she someone watching Derek to see if he knows something about his mother's whereabouts?
Then again, it may be something related to his occupation at the Credit Card company. Did some numbers oddly appear in a client's account that turned out to be the rounded-off pennies from other accounts, skimming untracable residuals?
This can go many ways... Oh, you can keep the 'Cluck This' 10pc set.
Why is Derek's mother missing missing? Was she a reporter who uncovered something akin to the Panama Papers? Was she a secretary who discovered her company was a front for something shady? Or did she merely recognize someone on the street that day that she shouldn't have?
And what of the girl he likes? Is she someone he knew from high school, or is she someone watching Derek to see if he knows something about his mother's whereabouts?
Then again, it may be something related to his occupation at the Credit Card company. Did some numbers oddly appear in a client's account that turned out to be the rounded-off pennies from other accounts, skimming untracable residuals?
This can go many ways... Oh, you can keep the 'Cluck This' 10pc set.