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 My First BGM! Feedback Please
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#1
03-23-2010, 05:58 PM
This is my first attempt on making a BGM for my game. Tell me what you think of it.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=TOJ3P5A8
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03-23-2010, 06:37 PM
pretty decent, I like it lol
can't give constructive criticism because my ears isnt trained to do so lol so yeah, i think you did a nice job lol
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03-23-2010, 06:48 PM
Thank you. ^^
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03-23-2010, 08:29 PM
For some reason, Megaupload tells me that the file isn't there oô So sadly, I can't listen to this.
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#5
03-23-2010, 08:32 PM
Reupload the tune.
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#6
03-23-2010, 11:42 PM
Ok, i'm uploading it right now.

Edit: Ok it's working again.
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03-24-2010, 06:35 AM
Yeah, another musician...
Nice tones ... it's look so funny LoL

Well, In my opinion u should give some melody accompanyment or some chord
Beside percussions
I'm sorry.. I'm not fluent in english

What program(s) do you use?
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03-24-2010, 05:47 PM
Not bat in my oppinion.
It feels like something is still missing, though. A twist, an other instrument, a part of a tune...I'm not sure.
In facht, after reading Theodrics Post, I kinda agree with this line:
Quote:Well, In my opinion u should give some melody accompanyment or some chord
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03-24-2010, 06:01 PM
Add A-minor, G and F. That would sound good :)
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03-24-2010, 07:43 PM
I use FL Studio.

Ok i'll add more chords and instruments, thanks for the feedback. :)
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