Ace' Art and Feedback Thread

[Ace]

Hey I wanna post some drawings of mine and get some feedback on these to improve my drawing skills.
Over the years I drew many pictures and now I got a Wacom Bamboo Pen&Touch Graphics Tablet. With this I wanna color my art. Maybe you can help me to get better in drawing :D

So atm I got just 2 pictures colored, I have to get into it slowly :D

So here's the first, nothing special, just to get into it^^:

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and here is the sketch of the second one (about 2 years old, some kind of Naruto Char)

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and here the colored version

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Currently I am working on a own version of Auron from FFX which I drew about 1 year ago^^
I will upload it as soon as I finished it^^

[MetalRenard]

I think the first has a slight problem with perspective but I like your colouring in general :)
(P.S. You can tell I'm English, cause Americans write "color" not "colour")

[Kristovski]

I think you lost a lot of detail when you colored the second one, especially in the eye area.
Metal: if you type colour on an American computer, it won't even recognize it as a correct spelling. I was actually taught to spell it with a "U" in elementary and then told to change it by high school.

[Ace]

Ty Metal Man :D

Kristovski, what details do you mean? Could you explain it? Maybe I can improve it :D

Thanks for your feedback!

[Kristovski]

In spoiler2, the eyes have smaller fine lines in the hair edge, as well as the eye. I think if you were to include them in the colored version, it would add to the overall effect. I guess its the little crow's feet? Also, the cheek shadowing could be a little lighter. Personally, there's no way I could do that good of a coloring job. Your skills already blow way past mine. The black and white just spoils me a little before I look at the finished image.

[Ace]

OK i see, ty :D I will try to do that better next time. And thanks for the compliment

[Ace]

Sorry I didn't answer your post, ty for the feedback^^
I will try to do that.

Btw little update, just got less time atm^^

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[Ace]

New Picture, had nothing to do in school so I made this and now I'm busy coloring it with photoshop. WIP

[MetalRenard]

How does he walk?
Nice art though. Good proportions and all that. :)

[Ace]

He lost his feet during battle...
No, I will add them later :D

Thanks for the feedback :)